tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2502176161456143914.post3603953636338171884..comments2024-03-08T09:09:27.748-05:00Comments on Tara Tyler Talks: GUTGAA SPP #12 - The Knock-OffsTara Tylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2502176161456143914.post-58360572031855606092012-10-03T20:10:13.867-04:002012-10-03T20:10:13.867-04:00The opening surprised me with how much it grabbed ...The opening surprised me with how much it grabbed my attention and pulled me in. The query had a great voice that was reflected in the opening, a balance that is hard to achieve. Well done. You made my short list.Rose Cardinalnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2502176161456143914.post-84103727585131302002012-10-03T10:17:16.512-04:002012-10-03T10:17:16.512-04:00This is compelling. I kept coming back to it. The ...This is compelling. I kept coming back to it. The premise is unique, and the writing is edgy and funny. You have my vote!Mancheenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2502176161456143914.post-3358610709130583332012-10-01T19:43:20.750-04:002012-10-01T19:43:20.750-04:00I have no interest in reading about the manager of...I have no interest in reading about the manager of a children's band, but your voice was so funny and the writing so strong that I can't let this one slip by. I love when someone can win me over to a subject I might otherwise overlook. You have my vote!Slave to the Musenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2502176161456143914.post-4642154495982731742012-10-01T18:20:39.758-04:002012-10-01T18:20:39.758-04:00Funny! Solid query and a good opening. Love this l...Funny! Solid query and a good opening. Love this line: "But as the band’s first notes thundered through the room, her hope succumbed to an assault of power chords, a noise so punishing her cell phone went off like a car alarm in her pants." <br />I'll be voting later so check back! :)Slave to the Musenoreply@blogger.com