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Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Stuck

PAD, Day 20 - message in a bottle
Form - concrete

                               HELP!
                                I am
                                stuck
                                inside
                               a bottle.
                              I drank it
                             all up and
                            felt so small
                          so I decided to
                        crawl inside. Now
                      my head is throbbing
                    and I can't stop bobbing.
                   I think I floated out to sea.
                   If I do not get out soon, I
                   will float until it's noon and
                   the sun'll turn my boat into
                   a sauna. Can anyone hear
                  me? My situation looks dim.
                  I guess it's my own fault for
                    listening to him. Him who
                   promised escape from my
                    woes if I drank his magic
                     potion from this bottle.
                     Help? I'm stuck in this                       bottle.
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11 comments:

  1. Laura JosephsenApril 20, 2011 at 4:17 PM

    This. Is. AWESOME.

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  2. DanaApril 20, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    Very cool!

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  3. Carolyn ArnoldApril 20, 2011 at 6:05 PM

    aw very neat! :D

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  4. Author Joshua HoytApril 20, 2011 at 6:32 PM

    Great poem I look forward to following.

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  5. Heather M. GardnerApril 20, 2011 at 6:46 PM

    *Bowing
    That is so great!
    HMG

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  6. Plain JaneApril 20, 2011 at 7:25 PM

    This reminds me of an old commercial for Orange Crush where the little boy is trying to get the last drop out and sucks himself in. This is great!

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  7. Theresa MilsteinApril 20, 2011 at 11:07 PM

    Ha, ha, ha! What a fun concrete poem.

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  8. Heather HenryApril 21, 2011 at 12:58 AM

    Wow, you are so creative. I love the bottle shape and the poem, the way you tied it all together. Brilliant.

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  9. MISHApril 21, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    Hey TTT ~~ the poem has great visual appeal !!!!
    Very creative !!!

    ~MICHELLE~

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  10. Tara TylerApril 21, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    thanks guys! I appreciate the compliments immensely!

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  11. Rhonda @Laugh QuotesApril 23, 2011 at 4:55 PM

    Wow, this is awesome. I think my favorite part of doing the A-Z challenge is finding blogs like this.

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