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Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Ribbon of Dusk

I've been missing Aheila's drabble prompts, but this week it fits with my PAD #29, two for Tuesday - Daytime & Evening for a poetic ribbon drabble.

Dusk

That moment between
Light and darkness
Beautiful sight

Ribbon of pink and orange hues
Separates the day
From the night

Sun still blazes, through
Cloud hazes, evening
Fireplace ignite

Days' hours grow shorter
Nights grow colder
Cozy up tight

15 comments:

  1. So beautiful. Now I'm feeling are joy-joy inside. And the pic added to the good feeling as well.

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  2. Lovely. Both the words and the picture.

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  3. Good job, and I love that picture. :) Both beautiful.

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  4. Tara, how beautiful! I wish I could write poetry:)

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  5. Oh, that's lovely. You have such a way with drabbles and poetry.

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  6. Very nice! And you found the perfect accompanying photo.

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  7. Beautiful poem, and photo. Great work!

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  8. Ooh, I love how you tied it into the change of season. It's cooold in Chicago and fireplace sounds great!

    Beautiful picture to go w/ the beautiful image you evoked.

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  9. thanks for the sweet, encoraging comments!

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  10. I really love the way in which you've used the prompt... lovely imagery!!

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