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Wednesday, February 22, 2012

It's rough and chilly

It's Sensational Haiku Wednesday by Jenn!

Drafts

Cool air tingles skin
Makes me shiver, goosebumps form
Who left the door open?

~ ~ ~

Draft of chilly morn
Whispers hints of coming day
Possibilities

~ ~ ~

Life is a rough draft
Taking chances, risk mistakes
Trial and error

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24 comments:

  1. KarenFebruary 22, 2012 at 12:37 PM

    A great trio! Love the thought of possibilities for the new day.

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  2. becca givensFebruary 22, 2012 at 12:43 PM

    I like your set ... the 2nd is my fav!! :)

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  3. Angela BrownFebruary 22, 2012 at 12:58 PM

    I love reading your poems. I wish I were talented enough to actually write a haiku.

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  4. Emily R. KingFebruary 22, 2012 at 1:01 PM

    Your final set is my fav. Great haiku!

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  5. anthonynorthFebruary 22, 2012 at 1:24 PM

    Enjoyed them all but think the last is best.

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  6. Laura JosephsenFebruary 22, 2012 at 1:28 PM

    I felt cold just reading the first one. The second one is all anticipatory, and I adore the last one--it's very encouraging.

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  7. Alex J. CavanaughFebruary 22, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    Amazing that you found one word for the whole line on the second one.

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  8. Laura S.February 22, 2012 at 3:10 PM

    These are fantastic! I especially like the middle one.

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  9. Precy LarkinsFebruary 22, 2012 at 3:40 PM

    I love all three!

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  10. Lynda R Young as Elle CardyFebruary 22, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    Loved all three, especially the last one.

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  11. JazzbumpaFebruary 22, 2012 at 5:24 PM

    I especially like that last one.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  12. carol l mckennaFebruary 22, 2012 at 6:22 PM

    Excellent tryptich ~ thanks ~carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/ Sens Haiku ^_^

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  13. McKenzie McCannFebruary 22, 2012 at 7:04 PM

    Wow, now that is how you pull of haiku poems!

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  14. G-ManFebruary 22, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Tara Tyler...
    A Terrific Triad of Haiku!

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  15. Heather Day GilbertFebruary 22, 2012 at 7:54 PM

    Love your haiku...I have a poet on my blogspot today (De Jackson)
    and I wish poets got more facetime in the publishing world!

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  16. Angela CothranFebruary 22, 2012 at 8:01 PM

    Love "Life is a rough draft"

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  17. Tara TylerFebruary 22, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    thank you, friends!

    and i learned that a horse is also a draft!

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  18. RiaFebruary 22, 2012 at 10:57 PM

    I think I'm the only person who enjos a cold draft as a nice breeze

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  19. DanaFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    Nice! I especially like the second and third.

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  20. Jennie BennettFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:01 PM

    I love all of them, you are so talented!

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  21. Heather HenryFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:53 PM

    Sensational! I love your poems/haiku's. This one makes me want to throw on another sweater and get some hot cocoa. :D

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  22. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:42 PM

    yes, trial and error

    four jonestown senryuZ

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  23. Misha GerrickFebruary 24, 2012 at 2:28 AM

    Great Hiakus. I especially liked the last one. :-)

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  24. SuzyFebruary 25, 2012 at 3:25 AM

    Loved them all but the last one the most - so true. Nicely done.

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