Anticipation
Spring about to bloom
Warm sun, fresh rain, singing birds
Exciting senses
Gift wrapped boxes filled
With mystery. What could be
Inside? Excitement!
A knock at the door
Barking frenzy erupts from
Excitable dog
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Wednesday, March 14, 2012
Why all the excitement?
I can't believe I only have haiku on Sensational Haiku Wednesday! Exciting!
Anticipation
Spring about to bloom
Warm sun, fresh rain, singing birds
Exciting senses
Gift wrapped boxes filled
With mystery. What could be
Inside? Excitement!
A knock at the door
Barking frenzy erupts from
Excitable dog
Anticipation
Spring about to bloom
Warm sun, fresh rain, singing birds
Exciting senses
Gift wrapped boxes filled
With mystery. What could be
Inside? Excitement!
A knock at the door
Barking frenzy erupts from
Excitable dog
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30 comments:
Great haiku! I wonder what's in the boxes too.
Oh, I do love a good mystery. :D
Tara Tyler...
You sound like you have a thing for the UPS driver!
Loved your Haiku's...:-)
Loved your haiku - my dogs go nuts for the UPS guy too - of course, he gives them treats so that helps too.
A great trio! I have one of those excitable dogs!
Great take on 'excitement' ~ 3 excellent views ~namaste, Carol ^_^
This sounds like my month too, except for the dog :)
Yes, a lovely and exciting time of year.
Fun haiku! I've never been good at these, but I loved yours.
You don't have to get to the door to excite the dog....
Ooo, perfect haikus for the arrival of spring. Spring means newness and change and exciting things happening!
I like how often your blog banner changes. It's always so cute!
Great Haiku. Exciting theme. :)
Happy Pi Day!
I love a haiku.
So simple, so genuine.
Did I just write one? :)
thanks for the haiku
i also like to write it
write more, any time!
(Your previous friend, David, inspired me!)
That little excitable dog is winning my heart!
Fevered Excitement
Nice set!!
Very fun! Well done!
Every time I read one of your Haiku poems, I want to learn to write one. You make them look so easy...or rather, I just enjoy them a great deal.
"Gift wrapped boxes filled
With mystery" ... I like.
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
Now I miss my fur kid (who is at Grandma's right now) Love your take on excitement.
I love haiku. So much emotion with just a few words.
Just ketting you know I posted more on Circa. http://queendsheena.blogspot.com/2012/03/circa-special.html
thanks, guys!
and David & Victoria - great job with your haiku on haiku!
LOL...fun and surprising ending! Very nice.
R.M. @ newviewfromhere.wordpress.com
Love this haiku. It's spot on! Now I want to open a present and see my flowers bloom...oh, and I need to get a dog.
Packages are exciting, aren't they? That's chiefly why I buy on eBay I think :) Even small bubble wrap envelopes thrill me.
Definitely excitable moments and well done!
Very nice to see your wonderful haiku get the place all to itself today. ;) I was quizzing my son on poetry terms last night & totally thought of YOU when it came to haiku!
Who needs an alarm system when you have an automatic dog? ;) I have one too - big booming barks from her that I could do without most of the time...
Nicely done, my friend!
Few things rival the excitement of unwrapping gifts...
Lovely haiku! And thanks for your fun contribution to last week's Limerick-Off. Hope to see you back often!
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