Wednesday, February 22, 2012

It's rough and chilly

It's Sensational Haiku Wednesday by Jenn!

Drafts

Cool air tingles skin
Makes me shiver, goosebumps form
Who left the door open?

~ ~ ~

Draft of chilly morn
Whispers hints of coming day
Possibilities

~ ~ ~

Life is a rough draft
Taking chances, risk mistakes
Trial and error

24 comments:

Karen said...

A great trio! Love the thought of possibilities for the new day.

becca givens said...

I like your set ... the 2nd is my fav!! :)

Angela Brown said...

I love reading your poems. I wish I were talented enough to actually write a haiku.

Emily R. King said...

Your final set is my fav. Great haiku!

anthonynorth said...

Enjoyed them all but think the last is best.

Laura Josephsen said...

I felt cold just reading the first one. The second one is all anticipatory, and I adore the last one--it's very encouraging.

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Amazing that you found one word for the whole line on the second one.

Laura Marcella said...

These are fantastic! I especially like the middle one.

cherie said...

I love all three!

Lynda R Young said...

Loved all three, especially the last one.

Jazzbumpa said...

I especially like that last one.

Cheers!
JzB

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Excellent tryptich ~ thanks ~carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/ Sens Haiku ^_^

McKenzie McCann said...

Wow, now that is how you pull of haiku poems!

G-Man said...

Tara Tyler...
A Terrific Triad of Haiku!

Heather Day Gilbert said...

Love your haiku...I have a poet on my blogspot today (De Jackson)
and I wish poets got more facetime in the publishing world!

Angela Cothran said...

Love "Life is a rough draft"

Tara Tyler said...

thank you, friends!

and i learned that a horse is also a draft!

Ria said...

I think I'm the only person who enjos a cold draft as a nice breeze

Dana said...

Nice! I especially like the second and third.

J. A. Bennett said...

I love all of them, you are so talented!

Heather Henry said...

Sensational! I love your poems/haiku's. This one makes me want to throw on another sweater and get some hot cocoa. :D

zongrik said...

yes, trial and error

four jonestown senryuZ

Misha Gericke said...

Great Hiakus. I especially liked the last one. :-)

Suzy said...

Loved them all but the last one the most - so true. Nicely done.