Drafts
Cool air tingles skin
Makes me shiver, goosebumps form
Who left the door open?
~ ~ ~
Draft of chilly morn
Whispers hints of coming day
Possibilities
~ ~ ~
Life is a rough draft
Taking chances, risk mistakes
Trial and error
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Wednesday, February 22, 2012
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24 comments:
A great trio! Love the thought of possibilities for the new day.
I like your set ... the 2nd is my fav!! :)
I love reading your poems. I wish I were talented enough to actually write a haiku.
Your final set is my fav. Great haiku!
Enjoyed them all but think the last is best.
I felt cold just reading the first one. The second one is all anticipatory, and I adore the last one--it's very encouraging.
Amazing that you found one word for the whole line on the second one.
These are fantastic! I especially like the middle one.
I love all three!
Loved all three, especially the last one.
I especially like that last one.
Cheers!
JzB
Excellent tryptich ~ thanks ~carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/ Sens Haiku ^_^
Wow, now that is how you pull of haiku poems!
Tara Tyler...
A Terrific Triad of Haiku!
Love your haiku...I have a poet on my blogspot today (De Jackson)
and I wish poets got more facetime in the publishing world!
Love "Life is a rough draft"
thank you, friends!
and i learned that a horse is also a draft!
I think I'm the only person who enjos a cold draft as a nice breeze
Nice! I especially like the second and third.
I love all of them, you are so talented!
Sensational! I love your poems/haiku's. This one makes me want to throw on another sweater and get some hot cocoa. :D
yes, trial and error
four jonestown senryuZ
Great Hiakus. I especially liked the last one. :-)
Loved them all but the last one the most - so true. Nicely done.
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