Cleaning is a Waste
My day is so short
I have a big choice to make
Vacuum or laundry
I have a big choice to make
Vacuum or laundry
But seriously,
Life is a Series of Choices
My life has flown by
How did I get to this point?
Choosing this or that
Future up to me
Must make the most of what's left
Whether smile or frown
My life has flown by
How did I get to this point?
Choosing this or that
Future up to me
Must make the most of what's left
Whether smile or frown
30 comments:
Wow, fantastic words there tara.
Thank you for your comments on my blog. Nice to know I'm not alone :)
LOL - oh the curse of house work. I dread it and hate it.
Great job on your haiku's today!
Cleaning is a waste! The world needs more maids. And plastic dishes.
Always best to smile. Enjoyed those.
I can always think of something better to do with my time than clean, but I like a clean house. I really need to get a maid :). Loved your haiku.
Ugh, don't remind me that there are pile of dishes in my sink at this very moment.
I mentioned you on my blog today, stop by when you get a chance :)
I love haiku Wednesday :)
Wait a second. I wasn't already following you? Well. That's fixed now. :)
I do enjoy a good haiku. These are awesome!
I should totally look into that NanoREVmo. That's just what I'm doing right now.
Cleaning is a waist. Why can't it be like The Jetsons. I want a robot that does everything for me, and loves the family too.
Great haiku.
You be a Haikuin Whammer Jammer!
These are great! The first one made me laugh. :)
I agree with one of your members who said you should have a poem book published by now. Your creative mind is a blessing.
mom
Loved all of your poetry today! And I know how the cleaning feels - it's always the last thing I want to do, but it always needs to get done.
Very nice! I love haiku :)
These are great ... I hope you choose to smile when you make the cleaning choice :)
I clicked over from JA Bennet's blog to say Hello ...
Well crafted poetry TTT !!
You always write such interesting haikus.
There's an acknowledgement for you on today's post. Swing by when you have a chance.
Yes, more maids! My dream is to make enough at writing to hire a cleaning service.
Love your Haiku! Cleaning is definitely a waste, when their is so many other things to do! :)
Oh, I so totally agree: Cleaning IS a waste!
Fleeting Soul Food
Great haiku! Love it!
Awesome haiku. I have my son vacuum with me as it's fun for him.
Argh...I agree with it.
Hi! I saw your award on A Book, A Girl... and needed to stop by. Glad I did! Love the Haikus... laundry or vacuum? Such a dilemma!
I love this! Haikus should, in general, be a LOT more like these. LOVED THEM.
Fun haikus. Now I feel more guilty for not getting my cleaning done today, even though it's a waste!
Very thought provoking haiku. Thanks for visiting my blog.
Eve, thanks for your words too!
Abby, i dont know why i write about it! to make it less ugly?
Alex, why doesnt technology invent what we really need? self cleaning houses & disposable clothes (remember in andromeda strain?)
Anthony, thank you =)
Isis, something always needs attention...
JA, thanks again! you're so sweet!
Angie, me too!
David, i was wondering too (ha ha) you should! its kicking my butt into gear!
Jenny, exactly! so many more important yhings to do!
G-man, you're a whacka-haiku-doodle!
Laura, thanks!
Mom, gee thanks =)
Tyrean, futility at its finest
Dana, thanks, sweetie!
Joanne, glad you stopped by! i smile when its done, clean makes me happy, if only for a moment...
Mish, thanks! you're great!
Mary, i want to invent a self cleaning something, then i'll be rich! that little vacuuming robot is cool...i should get one!
Amy, chya! lets revolt =)
Teacher, thanks for the support!
RR, thanks!
Christine, yes, they do before they have to...
Elizabeth, make it go away!
Kim, thanks! nice to have you!
Peggy, thanks! i like a different kind of poetry =)
Lyn, sorry to remind you!
Suzy, likewise =)
I always find myself in this dilemma!! And I thought it was a Gemini trait!! :) Safest way out is to keep smiling!! :)
Yep, I hear you - and sometimes I choose "none of the above", and play Candyland with my Wee One instead. The vacuum will still be there later, but childhood is fleeting!
Nicely done!
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