Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Ribbon of Dusk

I've been missing Aheila's drabble prompts, but this week it fits with my PAD #29, two for Tuesday - Daytime & Evening for a poetic ribbon drabble.

Dusk

That moment between
Light and darkness
Beautiful sight

Ribbon of pink and orange hues
Separates the day
From the night

Sun still blazes, through
Cloud hazes, evening
Fireplace ignite

Days' hours grow shorter
Nights grow colder
Cozy up tight

15 comments:

E. Arroyo said...

Nice. And beautiful pic.

Angela Cothran said...

Aww, I love your poetry Tara :)

Angela Brown said...

So beautiful. Now I'm feeling are joy-joy inside. And the pic added to the good feeling as well.

Donna K. Weaver said...

Lovely. Both the words and the picture.

Leigh Covington said...

Good job, and I love that picture. :) Both beautiful.

Deana said...

Tara, how beautiful! I wish I could write poetry:)

mshatch said...

lovely poem and lovely pic :)

Laura Josephsen said...

Oh, that's lovely. You have such a way with drabbles and poetry.

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Very nice! And you found the perfect accompanying photo.

Christine Rains said...

Gorgeous. Both words and picture.

Julie said...

Beautiful poem, and photo. Great work!

Nicki Elson said...

Ooh, I love how you tied it into the change of season. It's cooold in Chicago and fireplace sounds great!

Beautiful picture to go w/ the beautiful image you evoked.

Tara Tyler said...

thanks for the sweet, encoraging comments!

Jessica Therrien said...

Beautiful poem and great pic!!

MISH said...

I really love the way in which you've used the prompt... lovely imagery!!