PAD, Day 20 - message in a bottle
Form - concrete
HELP!
I am
stuck
inside
a bottle.
I drank it
all up and
felt so small
so I decided to
crawl inside. Now
my head is throbbing
and I can't stop bobbing.
I think I floated out to sea.
If I do not get out soon, I
will float until it's noon and
the sun'll turn my boat into
a sauna. Can anyone hear
me? My situation looks dim.
I guess it's my own fault for
listening to him. Him who
promised escape from my
woes if I drank his magic
potion from this bottle.
Help? I'm stuck in this bottle.
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11 comments:
This. Is. AWESOME.
Very cool!
aw very neat! :D
Great poem I look forward to following.
*Bowing
That is so great!
HMG
This reminds me of an old commercial for Orange Crush where the little boy is trying to get the last drop out and sucks himself in. This is great!
Ha, ha, ha! What a fun concrete poem.
Wow, you are so creative. I love the bottle shape and the poem, the way you tied it all together. Brilliant.
Hey TTT ~~ the poem has great visual appeal !!!!
Very creative !!!
~MICHELLE~
thanks guys! I appreciate the compliments immensely!
Wow, this is awesome. I think my favorite part of doing the A-Z challenge is finding blogs like this.
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