Tara Tyler Talks: Stuck

PAD, Day 20 - message in a bottle
Form - concrete

                               HELP!
                                I am
                                stuck
                                inside
                               a bottle.
                              I drank it
                             all up and
                            felt so small
                          so I decided to
                        crawl inside. Now
                      my head is throbbing
                    and I can't stop bobbing.
                   I think I floated out to sea.
                   If I do not get out soon, I
                   will float until it's noon and
                   the sun'll turn my boat into
                   a sauna. Can anyone hear
                  me? My situation looks dim.
                  I guess it's my own fault for
                    listening to him. Him who
                   promised escape from my
                    woes if I drank his magic
                     potion from this bottle.
                     Help? I'm stuck in this                       bottle.

11 comments:

Laura Josephsen said...: This. Is. AWESOME.; April 20, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Dana said...: Very cool!; April 20, 2011 at 5:01 PM
Carolyn Arnold said...: aw very neat! :D; April 20, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Author Joshua Hoyt said...: Great poem I look forward to following.; April 20, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Heather M. Gardner said...: *Bowing
That is so great!
HMG; April 20, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Plain Jane said...: This reminds me of an old commercial for Orange Crush where the little boy is trying to get the last drop out and sucks himself in. This is great!; April 20, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Theresa Milstein said...: Ha, ha, ha! What a fun concrete poem.; April 20, 2011 at 11:07 PM
Heather Henry said...: Wow, you are so creative. I love the bottle shape and the poem, the way you tied it all together. Brilliant.; April 21, 2011 at 12:58 AM
MISH said...: Hey TTT ~~ the poem has great visual appeal !!!!
Very creative !!!

~MICHELLE~; April 21, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Tara Tyler said...: thanks guys! I appreciate the compliments immensely!; April 21, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Rhonda @Laugh Quotes said...: Wow, this is awesome. I think my favorite part of doing the A-Z challenge is finding blogs like this.; April 23, 2011 at 4:55 PM