I turned the Sensational Haiku Wednesday prompt (dare) into a fun story today! My seven year old liked it =)
Little MonkeysFive little monkeys
Take a shortcut home from school
Have to cross a creek
One dares to jump it
Misses edge and floats away
Four little monkeys
Now it’s getting lateOne dares to swing across it
But the vine breaks off
Three little monkeysHave to get home for dinner
One dares to swim it
Current is too strong
Only two little monkeys
Look at each other
“Now what do we do?”
“I’ll race you back the long way.”
So they start to run
They reach home and laughat dripping, soggy siblings
Smart little monkeys
24 comments:
Cute :) Sounds like something 7 year olds would do.
That is adorable! You are so talented :)
That was brilliant and so adorable.
I love the idea of mixing monkeys and haikus! Fabulous job!
Epic haiku and naughty monkeys - love it!
Hehehe! That was a lot of fun!
SO cute! I loved your haiku story, and the pictures were adorable as well. :)
I'll bet your kids loved it. That would make a fun picture book.
Tara Tyler...
Damn Fine Haikus!!
Adorable story I can see why yout little one liked it!
That is just too cute!
Very cute story and so clever the way you wrote it.
That is so cute!
Wowowee! wonderfully creative! I enjoyed all these very much. I want to read these to my kiddo.
Adorable, as always! :)
Cute monkey tale....excellent teaching story for children :)
This is precious ... great children's story!! :-)
This is precious ... great children's story!! :-)
This is adorable. :)
thanks, everyone!
must give credit to powerpoint clipart for pics =)
so glad you all liked it!
Very cute story! Well written and very creative!
How cute! You put alot of thought into this. Well done!
Cute!
Love your teach button too. I'd like to hang a few legislators these days. ;)
Joyce
http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/2011/09/writers-post-road-block-to-donuts.html
Ha, those are fun!! Well done :)
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