Pop Travel Ticket

I've been editing. I'm into chapter 5 (of 14). Then I will work on my query letter and edit some more. Here is a sample. Wanna go?

Pop Travel International - Ticket       

One use pop.                                    Friday, July 26, 2080.

Departure station: Peachtree Street, Downtown Atlanta, GA

Departure time: 3:20 PM.

Destination: Beasley Hills Plantation, Albany, GA

·         Arrive 30 minutes early to check in. You will undergo a brief pre-medical examination by a certified physician. Go to PopTravel.com to fill out and submit the pre-med check questionnaire.

·         It is strongly recommended that you DO NOT POP if you are: pregnant, epileptic or have been experiencing frequent headaches or seizures.

·         Any belongings larger than the indicated measurements will require a separate ticket.

·         Using pop travel is done at the risk of the traveler.

·         For any other questions or concerns visit PopTravel.com.

(PopTravel.com is not a real site, yet)