§ sandbar
§ onerous
§ wink
§ maneuver
§ nightly
The theme: dreaming and home
Getaway.
The waiter gives me a wink with my tropical drink.
I wade from the beach to the sandbar and maneuver around onerous seaweed threatening to slow me down.
I rest my hand on a strong shoulder…
then I wake up from my nightly dream of a getaway from home.
6 comments:
Fifty words would be challenging, but it's a good exercise.
Good luck
Sometimes its more challenging to come up with 50 words or 150 words than it is to come up with 500 or 1500. You said a lot in so few words!
Very nice! You did that nicely -- and writing shorter is always hard.
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I really liked that one. All the words went together so well.
mom
I like your tale, sometimes all it takes is a quick (or 50-word daydream) to refresh the mind and the spirit.
Beautiful picture, what is the location?
Thanks, y'all! 50 words is plenty for me - a woman of short stature and short spurts of words.
Gail - I looked back and it was just the header to antoher website. I'm sure you have better views in HI!
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