Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Why all the excitement?

I can't believe I only have haiku on Sensational Haiku Wednesday! Exciting!

Anticipation

Spring about to bloom
     Warm sun, fresh rain, singing birds
          Exciting senses

Gift wrapped boxes filled
     With mystery. What could be
          Inside? Excitement!

A knock at the door
     Barking frenzy erupts from
          Excitable dog 


30 comments:

Christine Rains said...

Great haiku! I wonder what's in the boxes too.

Stina said...

Oh, I do love a good mystery. :D

G-Man said...

Tara Tyler...
You sound like you have a thing for the UPS driver!
Loved your Haiku's...:-)

Tyrean Martinson said...

Loved your haiku - my dogs go nuts for the UPS guy too - of course, he gives them treats so that helps too.

Karen said...

A great trio! I have one of those excitable dogs!

carol l mckenna said...

Great take on 'excitement' ~ 3 excellent views ~namaste, Carol ^_^

Jennie Bennett said...

This sounds like my month too, except for the dog :)

anthonynorth said...

Yes, a lovely and exciting time of year.

Shallee said...

Fun haiku! I've never been good at these, but I loved yours.

Ria said...

You don't have to get to the door to excite the dog....

Laura S. said...

Ooo, perfect haikus for the arrival of spring. Spring means newness and change and exciting things happening!

I like how often your blog banner changes. It's always so cute!

M Pax said...

Great Haiku. Exciting theme. :)

Happy Pi Day!

David P. King said...

I love a haiku.
So simple, so genuine.
Did I just write one? :)

Victoria Lindstrom said...

thanks for the haiku

i also like to write it

write more, any time!

(Your previous friend, David, inspired me!)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

That little excitable dog is winning my heart!

Fevered Excitement

Anonymous said...

Nice set!!

Kelley Lynn said...

Very fun! Well done!

Angela Brown said...

Every time I read one of your Haiku poems, I want to learn to write one. You make them look so easy...or rather, I just enjoy them a great deal.

Anonymous said...

"Gift wrapped boxes filled
With mystery" ... I like.

~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com

Hazel said...

Now I miss my fur kid (who is at Grandma's right now) Love your take on excitement.

Sheena-kay Graham said...

I love haiku. So much emotion with just a few words.

Just ketting you know I posted more on Circa. http://queendsheena.blogspot.com/2012/03/circa-special.html

Tara Tyler said...

thanks, guys!

and David & Victoria - great job with your haiku on haiku!

Anonymous said...

LOL...fun and surprising ending! Very nice.

R.M. @ newviewfromhere.wordpress.com

Emily R. King said...

Love this haiku. It's spot on! Now I want to open a present and see my flowers bloom...oh, and I need to get a dog.

Bruce Miller said...

Packages are exciting, aren't they? That's chiefly why I buy on eBay I think :) Even small bubble wrap envelopes thrill me.

Kathy Reed said...

Definitely excitable moments and well done!

Nicki Elson said...

Very nice to see your wonderful haiku get the place all to itself today. ;) I was quizzing my son on poetry terms last night & totally thought of YOU when it came to haiku!

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said...

Who needs an alarm system when you have an automatic dog? ;) I have one too - big booming barks from her that I could do without most of the time...

Nicely done, my friend!

MISH said...

Few things rival the excitement of unwrapping gifts...

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Lovely haiku! And thanks for your fun contribution to last week's Limerick-Off. Hope to see you back often!

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