Wednesday, April 20, 2011


PAD, Day 20 - message in a bottle
Form - concrete

                                I am
                               a bottle.
                              I drank it
                             all up and
                            felt so small
                          so I decided to
                        crawl inside. Now
                      my head is throbbing
                    and I can't stop bobbing.
                   I think I floated out to sea.
                   If I do not get out soon, I
                   will float until it's noon and
                   the sun'll turn my boat into
                   a sauna. Can anyone hear
                  me? My situation looks dim.
                  I guess it's my own fault for
                    listening to him. Him who
                   promised escape from my
                    woes if I drank his magic
                     potion from this bottle.
                     Help? I'm stuck in this                       bottle.


Laura Josephsen said...

This. Is. AWESOME.

Dana said...

Very cool!

Carolyn Arnold said...

aw very neat! :D

Author Joshua Hoyt said...

Great poem I look forward to following.

Heather M. Gardner said...

That is so great!

Plain Jane said...

This reminds me of an old commercial for Orange Crush where the little boy is trying to get the last drop out and sucks himself in. This is great!

Theresa Milstein said...

Ha, ha, ha! What a fun concrete poem.

Heather Henry said...

Wow, you are so creative. I love the bottle shape and the poem, the way you tied it all together. Brilliant.

MISH said...

Hey TTT ~~ the poem has great visual appeal !!!!
Very creative !!!


Tara Tyler said...

thanks guys! I appreciate the compliments immensely!

Rhonda @Laugh Quotes said...

Wow, this is awesome. I think my favorite part of doing the A-Z challenge is finding blogs like this.

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